Tuesday, January 8, 2019
PEE paragraph
The release of gay rights allowed 'Cuffs' to have a main character who is also gay, during the show he has shown that he is treated equally and is open about being gay as of many years before this was an illegal act. This show allows the main character to show he is strong although in the social media they he would be perused as very weak and feminine.
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Louis. What is here shows some understanding but it is very short and not representative of GCSE standard.
ReplyDeleteI would expect there to be a clear contextual event or issue identified, linked to a number of events which take place (detailed evidence from the show) and then an explanation linked to the representation and the effect on the target audience.
IF... this is all you can do, then I requested two paragraphs - a second on another contextual issue.
Which you choose to do is up to you, but I would like it completed ASAP!
Mr P